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新东方半年封闭特训营是新东方考研针对考研重要的下半年开设的集中式、封闭式、高强度、军事化管理的集训辅导营。半年封闭特训营旨在通过半年左右时间，让学员从考研基础到重难点知识全力突破，一次考上心仪高校，不浪费学员时间和精力。半年封闭新东方考研特训营让学员在学习过程中的提升自己的考研战斗力，同时和志同道合的考研战友一起努力竞争提高。配备强的封闭特训营老师团队，从教学师资、进度监控、学习测评、心理调整等多方面提加强辅导力度。特训营是完全超越常规培训的先进教育体系，二十多年的科学发展经验和各大投资机构的强大资本支持，圆了数万考研学子的高校之梦。

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How enlightening and compelling the above drawing is!It is so funny that whoever sees it cannot help thinking:_____.(这句自己加完整，从宏观上描述一下图画就可以，笼统的，大体的)______while_______.(这句从微观上具体说明一下图画要描述的矛盾点，必须找到矛盾点，用到while这个单词)Simple as it looks,its intended meaning goes far deeper what on earth does the drawer really aim to convey.

第二段

What the image above vividly mirrors goes far more than a simple image,instead,it carries a thought provoking social phenomenon:____.(本文的主旨)There are upsetting(如文章不是讽刺性的，就把upsetting删除)parallels today in our contemporary community. For example,______.(举2个例子，如果字数够就举1个)

第三段

Much can be done. To begin with the schools and the mass media should develop,guide and cultivate noble and worthy values and qualities among people,doing their utmost to awaken people of the growing threat of this worsening situation.(of this worsening situation自己可以换成主旨的词，如果不换，这样也可以。如文章不是讽刺性的，就把worsening删除)What is more,the authorities concerned should play a dominant role in taking nationwide actions to curb(如文章不是讽刺性的，就把curb换成promote)such practices.In conclusion,all the society should make actively more sustained and concerted efforts.Although we still have a long way to go,a promising start has begun,and a happy,healthy and harmonious society may be not be far behind.